Salaries
One of the most difficult things in life is to get a good job and earn a good salary. Everybody wants a good future and, to have that we have to invest in it. But there are people who dind't study, who never invested and have a lot of money. An example of this is the soccer players. In my opinion, it is very unjust!
The soccer players earn a big salariy and the don't work so much. the only thing that they do is practice all the time and when they practice, thay are having fun. But, there are soccer players and famous people who help poor people,and it is a good thing, but we can't forget that there are a lot of people who work so much and don't have fun and earn a small salary.
However, i have to admit, soccer is something very fun. It is very goog to root for my team. Soccer is something that most of Brazilian people like. But that doesn't change my opinion abou the salaries.
People will always have different opinions, and we can't do something about unjust salaries. Unjust things is something that will always happen. But I think that we can't forget that the soccer players give entertainment for us, and they invest all the time to be a good soccer player.
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